Allan J. Emerson

Jun 16, 2015 2:59 PM EDT

Can't say I read the tabloids, but they do have eye-catching titles. We can learn a thing or two from them. It's good to read widely.

- Jacqueline Seewald

Jun 16, 2015 3:18 PM EDT

Their weirdness entrances me, Jacqueline. I can resist ordinary trash, but trash that transcends the ordinary gets me every time!

Allan

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Jun 16, 2015 4:32 PM EDT

Allan, it sounds like you get stuck in lines behind people with grocery carts filled with so many items you have lots of time to read these magazines. They are funny. (What? You mean they're not all the absolute truth?)

- Maris

Jun 16, 2015 4:43 PM EDT

Well, Maris, I used to believe they couldn't put it in the paper if it wasn't true. But lately I've started to have doubts...

Allan

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Jun 22, 2015 11:49 AM EDT

Trying to get caught up a little on posts and ran across this one that really made me laugh, Allan. I don't get caught so much by the supermarket tabloids but have definitely been hooked by some of those internet articles that pop up in my news feed. The seven foods that will kill you, or the one disease you probably have and don't know it, that kind of stuff. I can be very gullible. :D

- Patricia Stoltey

Jun 22, 2015 5:06 PM EDT

I know what you mean, Patricia. Some part of your brain can't help wanting to find out if you're eating the wrong thing, or if you have something that could kill you, even when your common sense tells you the whole thing's nothing but clickbait.

Allan

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Jun 10, 2015 10:52 AM EDT

That balance is difficult. Life intrudes on art. But art also draws from life. We all just have to make time to write as best we can, especially when it's something you really want to do.

- Jacqueline Seewald

Jun 10, 2015 11:16 AM EDT

True, Jacqueline. If you want to do something enough, you'll find a way eventually.


Allan

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Jun 11, 2015 7:32 AM EDT

I remember a phase when I wanted to be a ballerina. I was not a very realistic child.

- Patricia Stoltey

Jun 11, 2015 12:28 PM EDT

Neither was I, Pat--I wanted to be a cowboy, but not just any cowboy--I wanted to be Roy Rogers. (I especially coveted his horse.)

Allan

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Jun 02, 2015 10:14 AM EDT

Hi, Alan,

You're preaching to the choir I'm afraid! Like you, I've always loved to read. My only problem as a child was that my mother complained I read too much.

- Jacqueline Seewald

Jun 02, 2015 10:55 AM EDT

I know what you mean Jacqueline! I was always described as "the kid with his nose in a book." It's still in there, too. Allan

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Jun 03, 2015 6:45 AM EDT

Reading fiction is an addiction, but one of the healthier ones, unless you read while walking and end up flat against a light post. :-) Seriously, though, reading does improve your brain function, not to mention all the things you can learn even in fiction.

- Maryann Miller (@maryannwrites)

Jun 03, 2015 6:52 AM EDT

I also have the fiction addiction and read most genres, plus I throw in a non-fiction book once in a while.

I don't remember learning to read so much, but I do remember the sheer number of books I read as a kid. My mom was a reader too, mostly mysteries, so I began reading the classics (and lots of Erle Stanley Gardner) very early.

- Patricia Stoltey

Jun 03, 2015 7:36 AM EDT

Hi Maryann,


True, as addictions go, it's better to be addicted to reading than to some other things. Haven't walked into a post (yet) while reading, but I've let stuff on the stove burn to a crisp. I think you're right too about learning something from fiction.

Allan

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Jun 03, 2015 7:52 AM EDT

Pat, I also like to mix genres and I do read non-fiction too. I remember Erle Stanley Gardner very well. As I recall, often his titles featured alliteration. I still remember one (The Case of the Singing Skirt). Along with Dead Wrong, which I just finished recently (I believe you've read it too :) I've been reading some historical fiction and some of Alice Munro's short stories.

Allan

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Jan 10, 2016 2:20 PM EST

Hi Allan, I've just read "Death of a Bride and Groom", and since you asked for feedback, I thought I'd give you some. First of all, congratulations on actually writing a book that doesn't feature the "f" word or similar profanities! So refreshing, and an often-requested condition by the borrowers I work with in my library job. Keep it up!
My only criticism would be that there were so many characters that I had trouble keeping track of who was who - and a couple of them having similar names didn't help me. Maybe I'm just getting old... Anyway, I'll certainly read the next volume, when it's available in Australia. Thanks!

- Annette

Jan 10, 2016 6:52 PM EST

Thanks for taking time to provide feedback, Annette! It's much appreciated. There are a lot of characters in Death of a Bride and Groom and I can see how you might lose track. You'll be pleased to hear that in the next book, Death of an Action Hero,I've reined in the number of characters, while hopefully keeping the cast varied enough to keep readers entertained.

Great to hear from Australia. As you may have noticed from my Bio, I lived there for a while. I was in Sydney--if you don`t mind telling me, what city are you in?

Thanks for taking time to comment, and I hope you enjoy the next book in the Honeymoon Falls series.

Allan

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May 19, 2015 12:27 PM EDT

Hi, Allan,

I think it's great that you've been offered a contract for your second novel as well. Five Star has only offered me one at a time over the years which is discouraging. As to reading out of sequence in a series, it's done all the time. Just make certain that your second novel can be read as a complete entity.

- Jacqueline Seewald

May 19, 2015 1:52 PM EDT

You only spent two years writing and revising your first book?? OMG, my new role model. Sometimes, it helps to make a list of all the characters you have so far and the contribution you intend each to make to your plot; sometimes, that helps weed out a few and focus your goals. You might also discover that this is your process. A big hairy mess that sorts itself out along the way, and you fix it in your next draft (not the draft you send to the editor of course!).

- Sheila York

May 19, 2015 3:20 PM EDT

Congratulations on the looming release! Working in back story from a previous novel is always tricky, but I try to treat it the same way I do back story for stand-alone books, by weaving in the information when it becomes necessary for the reader. I don't think anyone minds reading reminders about what happened in a previous book, but we don't want it dumped on us in a big glut. That's my two cents' worth.

- Karen McCullough

May 20, 2015 5:56 AM EDT

Hi Allan -- it's good to see you jumping into blogger world. It's looking good! None of this stuff is easy, but in my humble opinion, it's all fun. Otherwise, being retired, I'd pick another way to spend my free time.

I tried the series thing with my two Sylvia and Willie novels, then jumped ship and wrote a standalone...followed by a sequel wip which I never intended.

Yes, I'll pick up a novel from the middle of a series to try it out. I like enough backstory to introduce the character, knowing that if I want more I can go back to the beginning of the series. Each book should be readable as a standalone.

- Patricia Stoltey

May 20, 2015 7:58 AM EDT

I wish I'd been offered a contract for more than one book at a time. I work better with a goal/deadline. I've had the same concerns about my series that you have. I avoid dumping backstory and weave it in as needed. Each book in a series should be read as a standalone so it can be read in any order. It doesn't bother me when I discover a book I'm reading is part of a series. If interested enough, I'll look for the others in that series.

One reader commented that she didn't realize my book she'd been reading was part of a series, and that it explained her confusion about a certain situation. It's sometimes difficult to know just how much backstory you need.

- Carole Price

May 20, 2015 4:12 PM EDT

Hang in there. We are all traveling the same road, just different directions. I, too, am a Five Star Author and know how exciting the first book can be. Then when the second one comes out you hope it's as good or better. A series? What about #3? Writer's have lots of questions, it is what we are made up of...curiosity, tenacity, imagination, emotion...add a little spice and there we are. Great first blog. Much good luck on the writing journey.

- Bonnie (BD) Tharp

May 20, 2015 7:11 PM EDT

Interesting first blog, Allan. Sounds like you are well on your way. I, too, am a Five Star writer, and I'm on book three right now. I've learned a lot over the last few years. I would second the idea of keeping a looseleaf notebook with all the names and places and brief descriptions of your characters. Also keep timelines so you won't write something in a later book that doesn't agree with your earlier book. Good luck!

- Susan Van Kirk

May 21, 2015 2:45 PM EDT

Hi Jacqueline, thanks for your advice and comments. I'm hoping I've figured out how to respond to them without scrambling everything like last time. As I mentioned, I don't have a multi-book contract either. The deadline I mentioned is self-imposed to keep me from procrastinating until the end of time. :)

Sheila, I think the "big hairy mess" you mention describes my process perfectly. As for being your role model, that would be an honour, but when I mentioned it took me two years to write the book I was reckoning how much total time I spent actually writing, revising, editing, etc. I don't even want to think about the times I gave up, drifted into other stories, or spent mulling potential plot developments.

Karen, I'm trying to do the gradual working in of essential elements from the first book, but I am finding it hard to avoid the info dumps. (And I know they're reader poison.) I'm beginning to think that it just isn't possible to give the reader a total understanding of a character from the previous book, just enough to understand why he or she might behave the way they're doing. I'll have to see how it goes. Could be my urge to fill in the backstory comes from all the time I spent writing them and fleshing them out in the first book.

Patricia, thanks for your comments. You're my role model for social media. You manage to be everywhere and always have something encouraging/insightful to say. Glad to hear you're willing to jump into the middle of a series sometimes.

Carole, thanks for commenting. Re the contract, see my response to Jacqueline above. I agree that it's difficult to tell how much backstory is needed, but I guess it's something I'll have to work on. Maybe I'll have more perspective when I get to the editing (many moons from now). I usually wind up cutting a lot, so that could be when where to slim down backstory becomes more obvious.

Bonnie, thanks for the good wishes! I'm always glad to meet another Five Star author.

Susan, another Five Star alumnus! I've started jotting down some of the details from the first book: eye color, age, family background, etc. And sometimes wishing I'd planned ahead a little more and hadn't limited a character's options. Amazing what experience teaches you, isn't it?


OK everyone, this is how the webmaster told me to respond, so I'm going to push the button and hope it makes sense. The suspense is killing me! (That has to have been a book title somewhere, I'm sure.)

- Allan J. Emerson